It's interesting how, on one hand, he's rejected the central elements of his homefic - namely, the wangst - but still clinging to some of its trappings, such as the drinking. I feel like you did a good job with Cupid's characterization. UBEROverlord on 19:30:00 UTC Link to this That said, congratulations on a successful first outing for RC 333. “ “You said you could travel by plot hole, Lapis? Can you try and get us in there?” Could you please explain it?Īlso, there is one error that slipped past the radar: Given that Lapis hadn't said anything derogatory, this line seems out of place to me. “I understand that you didn’t know better, though given your age, I’m not surprised at all. “Hey now, it’s totally fine,” Cupid replied, patting her cerulean locks. Upon realizing what she’d just said, Lapis flinched and covered her face.“Sorry, sorry! That was totally uncalled for, I swear!” Speaking of Lapis, something seems out of place. For example, I thought that I'd be able to have a more direct hand in Lapis' dialogue. One comment, though: In the future, please tell your betas before you post so that they don't end up feeling blindsided. I just read through the mission today, and I must admit that Lapis' reactions are a lot more believable. Ratbrainbasher on 05:19:00 UTC Link to this But I'd hold on on launching that site just yet.
I don't have that trust with you.Īgain, it's nice that you're super pumped to be here. People whose judgement can be trusted based on how they interact with the community.
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While I would love nothing more than to have a proper PPC site and bulletin board with mods and admins and what not, I want said mods and admins to be people with experience. I assume that, as the creator of this site, you would be the admin of it. My final concern ties into the previous one. I'm not saying that you won't stick around - heck, you could outlast all of us - but as of right now I'm not comfortable letting someone so fresh host PPC stories. The PPC tends to suffer a relatively high newbie turnover rate. So if one person sets themselves up as the host for all PPC works, what that's likely to mean is that we lose everything when they let the site lapse." "I'd love to think you're going to stick around for decades to come, but there's only a handful of people here who've made it through the last decade. Unless you can think of a major reason why said site isn't up to snuff, I'm not really seeing a reason to replace it at this moment in time. The Lost Tales does what it needs to do pretty well. Actually, I pretty much have the same concerns Huinesoron did when he posted in your previous thread regarding takedowns.įirst off, we have a place to post stories that are in danger of falling through the cracks.
While your enthusiasm for the PPC is admirable, I have some qualms about this.
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